All people need a helpful friend in their lives. There are many words in this world that describe me as a friend. Though the best word would be helpful.
Helpful because whenever my friends have problems I always help them, we are always helping each other anyway we can. whenever I see my friends I always make sure to ask them if they are okay or not. I sometimes act like an older sister to them by trying to solve their problems or helping them find the right words to say when they're not thinking about their actoins. For example, my friend Afrikka was to get suspended one last time and then get expelled, and since I did'nt want that to happen I always reminded her to calm down. Good friends only come once in a lifetime and thats why we all need to be helpful to them.
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GREAT JOB
ReplyDeletep.s you spelled friend wrong
WWOOWW ur peice was goo but i think that you did a really goo piece and i also think that you could work on tha spelling cuase you spelled "FRIEND" worng......wateva it was good
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i like ur details
ReplyDeletedear ana,
ReplyDeleteyour piece is great i would love to be one of your friends to be treated that way. you are a very describale person. your piece has great details and supporting details too. i love your hook/thesis it is descriptive. you need to work on your conclusion and make it have more details. hope you keep up your good work and keep treating your friends that way.
sincerley,
alexandra nunez :)