Action:
Tic-Toc-Tic-Toc Cloook Cloook Cloook.
The clock tocked and tocked...
Tic-Toc-Tic Clumpp! louder than ever the five o'clock bell dinged. We all got scared off our skins and made us tremble.
Claaaak! the mall lights went off and the mall was...
Description:
The lights were off and the mall was dark and frosty. It was silent, creeply silent as if all of a sudden all the people had gone out of the mall in seconds.
Dialouge:
"Hey lets keep playing," Luis flirted to Anita " Its still to early for the mall to close. Its only 5:37."
"Uhhh, do you want to Hanna?" asked Anita
"Sure anyways its still too early."
Thursday, June 18, 2009
Wednesday, June 17, 2009
Dialouge Action Description Story...
Chapter one
The ask-out
"Hey we should go the the mall today." Anita yawned.
"Sure anyways there's nothing to do." Hanna responded.
"I know, so do you want to invite anyone else?"
"You know I don't really care, but if we do then who?"
"Uhhhmm then lets invite...umm...Luis?"
"Sure if you want to, but which one chubby or skinny?"
"Chubby?!"
"Sure."
Anita and Hanna walked to Ms.Weronka's class and waited for Luis to come in.
"Hey Luis," Anita called "Do you ummm have any plans for today?"
"No not at all, why?" Luis responded.
"Well...jeje...I was just...umm..jeje..."
"Ohhh get on with it" Hanna whined "Luis she wants to know if you want to go to the mall today after school."
"Oh well sure then well meet."
"Ok then its settled well meet at the café."
"Yeah so okay bye Anita, bye Hanna."
"Bye." Both of the girls yelled as Luis walked away.
"See was that so hard to do?" Hanna asked
"Ha Ha Ha... not funny."
"Sooo you guys have a date now."
"You're part of it too you know, you're going too."
The girls walked to Ms.Reen's class and began chatting while the teacher arrived.
Chapter Two
Waiting
It was finally after school and the girls were outside the It café waiting for Luis to come out of biology.
"Boo!"
"Ahhhhhh!" the girls yelled
"Yeah I got you!"
"That wasn't funny." Anita yelled annoyed.
Anita and Hanna walked to Ms.Weronka's class and waited for Luis to come in.
"Hey Luis," Anita called "Do you ummm have any plans for today?"
"No not at all, why?" Luis responded.
"Well...jeje...I was just...umm..jeje..."
"Ohhh get on with it" Hanna whined "Luis she wants to know if you want to go to the mall today after school."
"Oh well sure then well meet."
"Ok then its settled well meet at the café."
"Yeah so okay bye Anita, bye Hanna."
"Bye." Both of the girls yelled as Luis walked away.
"See was that so hard to do?" Hanna asked
"Ha Ha Ha... not funny."
"Sooo you guys have a date now."
"You're part of it too you know, you're going too."
The girls walked to Ms.Reen's class and began chatting while the teacher arrived.
Chapter Two
Waiting
It was finally after school and the girls were outside the It café waiting for Luis to come out of biology.
"Boo!"
"Ahhhhhh!" the girls yelled
"Yeah I got you!"
"That wasn't funny." Anita yelled annoyed.
"You know it was!" Luis giggled
"Hahahahaha! I know it was."
"So are we ready to go or are you two gonna be there just sugary and all?" Hanna announced
"Huuumm yeah lets go!"
They all began to walk to the mall since it was only a couple of blocks away.
"Yes were finally here." Hana praised.
"Yeah so which store should we go to first?" Luis asked.
"Well I don't know about you guys but I'm going to the food court to get me a corn dog." Anita replied
"Oh my god, yeah no wonder you're so fat!" Hanna laughed.
"Shut up, fine lets go somewhere else.!"
The kids walked to the arcade and began playing and playing until the clock struck 6:30 pm.
Clack Clack Clack
The clock rang louderr than ever.
Toc-Toc-Toc
Clack!
All of the sudden the lights went off and teh mall became silent dead.
"OhhOhhh"The kids whispered.
"I think we should leave now." Anita trembeled as the mall got colder and colder each minute.
Crashhh!
"Ahhhhhhh!" All three of the kids went running to the door but it was locked and stiff.
The mall became frosty and damp silently creepy as if all of a sudden all the people had gone out of the mall in just seconds.The kids knew they were doomed.
A shadow came and grabbed them. A CLOWN.
Tuesday, June 16, 2009
Lady Q: The Rise and Fall of a Latin Queen by Reymundo Sanchez and Sonia Rodriguez.This book is Non-Fiction because it is about the real life of Sonia Rodriguez and her making and unmaking as a Latin Queen.
This book is about a woman named Sonia Rodriguez and her whole life as a little girl to a woman. When Sonia was a little girl her parents would beat her up and never loved her. They would pay more attention to Sonia's sister and if they got mad they would take out all their anger on her.As she grew up her parents still treated her bad and soon when she became eleven her uncle and cousin started to molest her and abuse her.As she tries her best to win her moms love and respect but every time gets rejected and beat up she gives up and starts to become a rebel.After this she joins the Almighty Latin King Nation and becomes involved in the drugs and sex life.
My favorite part was on page 107. I love this part because Sonia beats up a girl that is jumping her sister. I really enjoyed this part because it proves how family can stick up for each other even thought they never actually payed attention to you.
I would recomend this book to people that are involved ingangs and that are in 7th grade an dup because it has mature language and sexual contents. This book is for mostly girls because it was written for young girls in gangs and that want to get in them to help them understand that doing drugs or gangs is very bad for your life. This book would be awesome if you have ever read the books by Reymundo Sanchez such as Once a King Always a King and My bloody Life.
This book is so awesome an dit is one of my favorite books because it helped me understand the real life situations about other people and helped me understand this world a little better.
Tuesday, June 2, 2009
"Aw! That creeped me out," Gabby whispered.
"Shee Gabby, it wasn't so scary," exclaimed Ana.
"Uggg...whatever guys just keep walking," cautioned Lesly. "Hurry up Alonzo!"
"You too Roach," whispered Gabby.
"Whoosh!"
"What was that?" Ana whispered the skin on her arms was chilly and covered with with goosebumps.
"I don't know but I want to get out of here now," Gabby insisted. "This place is so creepy I just don't want to be here anymore."
"Come on scary cat maybe it was just an old...whatever just the wind." Alonzo chuckled.
"Awww!" a loud scream echoed from behind all the friends.
"Juanita!...Juanita!..." everyone yelled.
Toc-Toc-Toc
"Is that you Juanita," Roach whispered with a very dry and old voice breaking the silence of the dark part of the hall that seemed more like an alley than an abandoned hallway. "Shoot guys we really need to get out of here. She didnt even respond an dshes not behind us anymore!"
Toc-Toc-Toc
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" all the kids rushed to the rusty door of what had once been a school library.
"Whoosh!"
Clack!
"What was that?" questioned Lesly.
"Hurry open the door!" Gabby cried. Little purple circles were visible under her melted honey brown eyes. Her moist pupils red and swollen.
"I cant! Help me Roach." Alonzo called.
"Kay waiiiiiiiiii..." Roaches voice disappeared into the distance and his screams echoed through the hall. "Help! Help! Guys help me please! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!"
"Roach!" screamed Gabby.
"Auuggg! Auggg!" the sound of someone begging for air filled the room "Hheellpp!"
"Anaaaa!" Lesly screamed.
"Guys please lets go!" Gabby explained now crying even more. Her eyes now completely swollen and wet as an early rainshower.
Eveyone began runnig as fast as their legs could take them.
"Ouchh!" Gabby yelled.
"Gabby what are you doing in the ground?" Alonzo asked trying to help her get up.
"I dont know somebody tripped me!" Gabby cried her voice shaky and rusty.
"Here let me help you!" Alonzo replied
"Okay but hurryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!"
Whoosh!
"Gabby! Guys Gabby's gone someone just took her!"
"Im gonna be sick!" Lesly screamed her forehead moist and sweaty her skin was paler than snow and her skin colder than ice.
"Lesly dont do this to me!" Alonzo yelled "I don twant to be here alone so try to keep up please! Please Lesly please!"
"Uggg...Ugg.. cheeeea drooont worrrryi"Lesly swallowed, "Ill makke hiiit"
"Please Lesly, I just want to say that I Love Youuuuuu!"
"Halllonzooo!" Lesly cried "Hallonzooo Bayeee!"
There Lesly layed alone and now DEAD...
"Shee Gabby, it wasn't so scary," exclaimed Ana.
"Uggg...whatever guys just keep walking," cautioned Lesly. "Hurry up Alonzo!"
"You too Roach," whispered Gabby.
"Whoosh!"
"What was that?" Ana whispered the skin on her arms was chilly and covered with with goosebumps.
"I don't know but I want to get out of here now," Gabby insisted. "This place is so creepy I just don't want to be here anymore."
"Come on scary cat maybe it was just an old...whatever just the wind." Alonzo chuckled.
"Awww!" a loud scream echoed from behind all the friends.
"Juanita!...Juanita!..." everyone yelled.
Toc-Toc-Toc
"Is that you Juanita," Roach whispered with a very dry and old voice breaking the silence of the dark part of the hall that seemed more like an alley than an abandoned hallway. "Shoot guys we really need to get out of here. She didnt even respond an dshes not behind us anymore!"
Toc-Toc-Toc
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" all the kids rushed to the rusty door of what had once been a school library.
"Whoosh!"
Clack!
"What was that?" questioned Lesly.
"Hurry open the door!" Gabby cried. Little purple circles were visible under her melted honey brown eyes. Her moist pupils red and swollen.
"I cant! Help me Roach." Alonzo called.
"Kay waiiiiiiiiii..." Roaches voice disappeared into the distance and his screams echoed through the hall. "Help! Help! Guys help me please! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!"
"Roach!" screamed Gabby.
"Auuggg! Auggg!" the sound of someone begging for air filled the room "Hheellpp!"
"Anaaaa!" Lesly screamed.
"Guys please lets go!" Gabby explained now crying even more. Her eyes now completely swollen and wet as an early rainshower.
Eveyone began runnig as fast as their legs could take them.
"Ouchh!" Gabby yelled.
"Gabby what are you doing in the ground?" Alonzo asked trying to help her get up.
"I dont know somebody tripped me!" Gabby cried her voice shaky and rusty.
"Here let me help you!" Alonzo replied
"Okay but hurryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!"
Whoosh!
"Gabby! Guys Gabby's gone someone just took her!"
"Im gonna be sick!" Lesly screamed her forehead moist and sweaty her skin was paler than snow and her skin colder than ice.
"Lesly dont do this to me!" Alonzo yelled "I don twant to be here alone so try to keep up please! Please Lesly please!"
"Uggg...Ugg.. cheeeea drooont worrrryi"Lesly swallowed, "Ill makke hiiit"
"Please Lesly, I just want to say that I Love Youuuuuu!"
"Halllonzooo!" Lesly cried "Hallonzooo Bayeee!"
There Lesly layed alone and now DEAD...
Monday, June 1, 2009
My earliest memory of reading is when I was 10 years old. I read with my friends. I read the book The Giver. It was about a boy who saw everything in the color black and white, he was supposed to be the new messanger and so he went with an old man who gave him massages and so he started feeling all the pain and seeing new colors and even smelling reality...
My biggest reading achivment in my entire lifetime is readingt the ENTIRE Twilight series in only one week and a half.!
My best reading memory is reading a brand new book with my sister. I was in the living room and my sister came to my house from her house and then she began doing her homework and she grabbed her backpack and gave me the book Lady Q: The rise and fall of a Latin Queen.
" Here." she said
" What?" I responded
" Read this book its so awesome. I know you're gonna like it."
" Fine, let me see it."
I began reading it and I felt warm and so...so...at home it felt like I was in the book living throught it felling every single detail. After this I LOVED this book so now its my favorite one and it has a special place in my room.
When I read I grab a pillow and go the park in front of my house. I lay under a shady tree with moist grass and put the pillow under my head. I get comfy leting the wind rush through my face and then I just begin reading. My favorite reading books are horror, romance, and fantasy. The enviorment around me is quiet and moist and windy. I like it like this because it helps me concentrate and imagine some of the stuff that is in the book.
If I was stranded on a deserted island and only ahd the chance to take five books it would definetly be: Eclipse, Lady Q, Blue is for nightmares, My Bloody Life, and Once a King Always a King. I chose these books because Eclipse is totally better than the other books since Jacob kisses Bella and all that stuff. Lady Q because it is my favorite book ever. Blue is for nightmares because its is horror and suspense mixed toghether. My Bloody Life because it is the making of Reymundo Sanches (a Latin King). Finally Once a King Always A King because it explains the life of Reymundo and his unmaking of a Lating King.
My biggest reading achivment in my entire lifetime is readingt the ENTIRE Twilight series in only one week and a half.!
My best reading memory is reading a brand new book with my sister. I was in the living room and my sister came to my house from her house and then she began doing her homework and she grabbed her backpack and gave me the book Lady Q: The rise and fall of a Latin Queen.
" Here." she said
" What?" I responded
" Read this book its so awesome. I know you're gonna like it."
" Fine, let me see it."
I began reading it and I felt warm and so...so...at home it felt like I was in the book living throught it felling every single detail. After this I LOVED this book so now its my favorite one and it has a special place in my room.
When I read I grab a pillow and go the park in front of my house. I lay under a shady tree with moist grass and put the pillow under my head. I get comfy leting the wind rush through my face and then I just begin reading. My favorite reading books are horror, romance, and fantasy. The enviorment around me is quiet and moist and windy. I like it like this because it helps me concentrate and imagine some of the stuff that is in the book.
If I was stranded on a deserted island and only ahd the chance to take five books it would definetly be: Eclipse, Lady Q, Blue is for nightmares, My Bloody Life, and Once a King Always a King. I chose these books because Eclipse is totally better than the other books since Jacob kisses Bella and all that stuff. Lady Q because it is my favorite book ever. Blue is for nightmares because its is horror and suspense mixed toghether. My Bloody Life because it is the making of Reymundo Sanches (a Latin King). Finally Once a King Always A King because it explains the life of Reymundo and his unmaking of a Lating King.
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