Thursday, June 18, 2009

3 Beginnings

Action:



Tic-Toc-Tic-Toc Cloook Cloook Cloook.

The clock tocked and tocked...

Tic-Toc-Tic Clumpp! louder than ever the five o'clock bell dinged. We all got scared off our skins and made us tremble.

Claaaak! the mall lights went off and the mall was...



Description:


The lights were off and the mall was dark and frosty. It was silent, creeply silent as if all of a sudden all the people had gone out of the mall in seconds.



Dialouge:

"Hey lets keep playing," Luis flirted to Anita " Its still to early for the mall to close. Its only 5:37."
"Uhhh, do you want to Hanna?" asked Anita
"Sure anyways its still too early."

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